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Reviews for Dance of Submission





 

Jade is an experienced slave and suddenly finds herself on the slave block again being sold to another master. Her only hope is to please him so he will keep her and not sell her. Now under a new master Jade must learn how to satisfy him as well as dance for him. The eldest slave has been given the task of helping Jade learn the ways of pleasuring their master with her dancing.

Although Thomas is very handsome as well as demanding both he and Jade must learn how it is to be between them. He finds himself having to punish her more than once, but is drawn to her all the same. Can he teach her what she needs to know without breaking her spirit?

Can Jade learn from her mistakes and become the slave that Thomas will want to keep and not sell out of displeasure? Or will Willow his number one slave fail in teaching Jade the dance of submission that their master so loves? Come along with these three and find out if all will be well among them and if Jade will find her place among Thomas’s slaves.

Dance of Submission is a novella about pleasure slaves and their lives among their masters household. As you read this you find yourself cringing as if you feel the pain of the lash as Jade is whipped for her mistakes. Miss Mason has a unique vision that shows itself with every page and each encounter between slave and master. Although it is very short Dance of Submission gives you everything you would want, from conflict to pleasure. I enjoyed every aspect of this novella and would read it again or another novella by Miss Mason.

Reviewed by: Debbie

Debbie

E-book Review

Despite being an experienced slave, Jade yet again finds herself on the move. Time and time again she has failed to give her new masters what they desire. Her current master, Sir Jason is disappointed with her as she is unable to tolerate the pain that he inflicts. She knows of his displeasure as he has not called her as much as he should. Now the time as come for Jade to be auctioned off.

Jade hopes that her new master is truly the one that she can finally please. Master Thomas has a voice that weakens Jade's knees, but, ultimately, there has to be more than that to make the partnership successful. But this time, she is taught a skill that could help her find what she is looking for.

Can Jade please her master in the way that she has now learnt? Or is she destined to be past from one auction to another never finding her true niche?

Dance of Submission takes you to a place that you can only really fantasise about. One of pain and love but also of acceptance and trust. But it also touches on the subject of rejection; a life experience that many, I suspect, can relate to.

I learn a lot from some of the authors that I read on a regular basis and Jude Mason is one of them. It doesn't happen all the time. There are many kinds of writers of which teachers and entertainers are amongst the many. If you ever find one of the authors that teach? Or if you are lucky enough to find one that does both? Grab them quick, lest you lose them forever!

No, but, seriously, Dance of Submission is a truly inspiring read and, of course, does what it intends. Hot, and sexy, it will definitely blow your mind.


Carrie White, Reviewer
eBook Reviews Weekly
http://www.ebook-reviews.net
http://www.hentracks.co.uk





Romance Junkies

Publisher: Tit-Elation Books
Release Date: December 2005
Blue Ribbon Rating: 4
Format: PRINT

Jade is an experienced slave who has had several owners and failed to please any of   them. Once again, she’s being auctioned off and fears the unknown expectations of a new master. For Jade, having a master who truly cares for her would be a dream come true.

Master Thomas is the man who purchases Jade at the auction. He already has one slave but his home is too large for only one girl to run properly. Master excites Jade with his voice alone, but Jade worries that he’ll find her lacking in whatever skills he’d desire.

Jade already knows that she’s not to Sir Jason’s liking. He’d reminded her many times over the previous weeks that he would be selling her. Sir Jason enjoys his slave to be able to take some pain along with the loving, Jade has a low tolerance for pain, and he’d eventually stopped calling her to his bed. The day of the auction arrives, as instructed, Jade carefully prepares herself and hopes fervently that her next master will be her true master. Jade knows that Sir Jason is right, and she is too soft for him. Jade desires to be accepted and cared for by a master who finds her appealing and maybe will even love her just a little. Will her next owner be the owner she’s dreamed of, or will Jade be destined to return to the slave block once again?

Jude Mason’s DANCE OF SUBMISSION is an interesting story told through an eye’s of a sexual slave. I’ve read many stories involving pleasure slaves and concubines in far off countries and in my mind romanticized them. Have you ever wondered what it would be like to be sold time and time again because you’re not exactly what the buyer wanted, to have no choice in what’s done with your body, or even the excitement at finally being bought by the owner you’d imagined? It’s truly fascinating to experience Jade’s emotional turmoil over a future that she has little or no control over as well as the calm acceptance that she portrays through each change in her life.


By Romance Junkies Reviewer: Chrissy Dionne
 



Reviewed by
Ephemera Bound Publishing
Erotic Fiction
Reviewed by
Peter Rosier

 

Dance of Submission is the story of Jade, a thirty-two year old brunette, sold as a slave to a new master, who has to learn how to please him with the aid of his existing and senior female slave, Willow.

A novelette with just under 70 pages only, the story is told in a zippy and attractive way which entices the reader and makes it an enjoyable literary romp. The erotic scenes are well drawn although somewhat repetitive but they do avoid a lot of the usual erotic story 'purple prose' clichés which is all to the good. Unfortunately, the novelette form did not allow space for more character development and it would have made the story both more erotic and more interesting had we known, for example, a little more about her new master, or why Willow is keen to help the newcomer Jade when she could become a rival for her master's affections in time, and just how far Willow's own affection for Jade extends.

Devotees of bondage and domination may find the punishment scenes a little lacking in detail and might have preferred more description of the lashing and spanking; literally a blow by blow account. But this is really a romantic story in the format of bondage, domination and submission, a sort of 'BDSM-lite', and it works well for those who like their romance with just a savouring of hot spice.

Dance of Submission by Jude Mason is available at
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